Angel of Death

Hey Ash, thanks for PMing me! This was a good chapter and before I continue one, I have to say that you should keep this in both Veronica and Will's ...

Hello again! My you are brilliant and this was yet another one of my favorite poems from you. Yes, I agree this is very different for you but you pulled ...

Hey Adrian! Its so great to read new poetry from you. I liked this one, it was strong and short which are always the best ones in my book. You ...

Hey, Ky!!! I love the way you write. Sometimes I feel like being a scientist just so that I pull back the lids of your mind and see how everything ...

Hey KJ, thanks for PMing me! This was intense and it was another lovely chapter but there were a few things... “Honey, what are you thinking about?” Mom asked me. ...

Hey Ash, I read this earlier but I didn't get a chance to review so here I am. I think this was a perfect next installment. I already knew that ...

Hey KJ! Thanks for the heads up, I liked this. Though it was a little rusty. My friends called in annoying. It should be 'My friends called it annoying' The ...

Hey Ari, Wow, I haven't read anything of yours in a while. How are you? Well anyways, I loved this. I'm not good at critiquing grammatical things but I will ...

Thanks for the heads up, Ky! This was another great chapter and it was way better than your last, which is bad, because now I have to wait for Chapter ...

Wow, this was great. I actually was wondering how you were supposed to write these type of letters. So now, when I get ready to send in my manuscript I ...

Hey again! Okay, to be honest, I think the introduction to this chapter can be improved. I didn't read the whole thing, because I'm a little pressed for time but ...

Hey, its me again! I saw your profile and I just thought that I'd check this out. Here's one thing that I found that needs to be fixed immediately. Its ...

Hey Ash, Well I liked this chapter but there were a few things that I wanted to point out. I open my mouth to feed but halt. Looking up at ...

Hello again! Wow this was intense. Your descriptions, were, as always wonderful and this I think, was one of the chapters that makes this so much different than Twilight. The ...

Hey Ash, I loved this chapter!! My favorite part was when Isaac and Sophia started singing along to the Beatles's song. It was nice that they finally had a moment ...